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整体不错，可爱的老师。海豹社这类型的做得是真不错，氛围以及台词人设，都比较好的写出他想写的一些道理，剧情不会突兀，很顺畅自然的单人线恋爱，很不错，程度把握很好，老师很喜欢。所以说你还是继续写这种吧，用点心OK？
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